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©2009-2010 =JasmineJean
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Charters Towers, Queensland.

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:iconktisiroppoix10:
Here's another one from me!

Pros
:bulletblue: I love the simplicity of this piece. It's minimalism at its most beautiful. It's simple, yet complex at the same time.
:bulletblue: The shadows create beautiful lines and movement that allows your eyes to move throughout the piece.
:bulletblue: The one crease in the metal right above the line of circles is almost cutting the lines that the shadows create so to speak.
:bulletblue: The fact that the shadows near the bottom start to get longer from right to left creates an interesting point of view and wonderful lines, reinforcing the movement of the viewers eyes.
:bulletpurple: On a deeper note, the difference of the between the pattern of circles at the bottom and the one at the top could symbolize differences and individuality.
:bulletpurple: Also possibly the idea of people getting avoided or made fun of because they are different, and the division between them.
:bulletpurple: The fact that the shadows of the circles are all different could show that people try to group together with certain similarities, but if they see one difference they don't like, they cast them off, even if they have that similarity. In this case the similarity is the shadows and circular shape.
:bulletblue: The texture in this is wonderful.
:bulletblue: There's round edges, straight lines, and rough edges all in this which creates variety, but also unity.
:bulletblue: The lines and edges are all crisp. It also has a good range of values.

Cons
:bulletgreen: Honestly I can't think of anything.

Overall
Absolutely Beautiful. Minimalism in its most beautiful form. Perfect 10 in my book. Wonderfully done.
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:iconpandoras-enigma:
Nice shadows, fantastic texture, what is it from?

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"Cover her face; mine eyes dazzle; she died young"
JOHN WEBSTER
:iconjasminejean:
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it. It was this big rustic pipe thing in Charters Towers near a mining cottage, not sure what it was to be honest...

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:painter: A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence. ~Leopold Stokowski

:gallery:My Gallery [link]
:iconpandoras-enigma:
lol, gotta love that pioneer architecture... anyways it's a great shot :)

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"Cover her face; mine eyes dazzle; she died young"
JOHN WEBSTER
:iconjasminejean:
Thanks a lot Sarah :) I really like it too

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:painter: A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence. ~Leopold Stokowski

:gallery:My Gallery [link]
:iconazza07:
Love the angle, and capture of the texture. Nice one Jas :)
:iconjasminejean:
Thanks a lot Aaron!!

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:painter: A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence. ~Leopold Stokowski

:gallery:My Gallery [link]
:iconjasminejean:
I'm glad that you like.

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:painter: A painter paints pictures on canvas. But musicians paint their pictures on silence. ~Leopold Stokowski

:gallery:My Gallery [link]

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